RescueRanger
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 | | Subject: The worst pirate you've ever heard of Mon May 08, 2017 12:27 pm | |
| Name: Kat Kheylana Age: 22 Class: Ricochet sniper Race: Bio engineered human Description: Kat is a rather small woman with a light tan all over her body. Her eyes are distinctly purple that give off a mechanic feel. Alot of her body is mechanically augmented based on her former abilities to boost them and turn them into a comical version of her former abilities. Kat herself is a loud spoken, cocky, sassy person who is willing to do alot assuming she gets payed for it. Strengths: -Mechanic augmentations, Kat has many augmentations build in to her body who help her get many perks and abilities normal humans could usually not get. - Mechanic Abilities:
-Aiming assists, many aim assists, calculation systems and trajectory calculators let her effectively ricochet bullets of off anything solid to hit Marks behind cover or out of direct line of sight. bullets can only bounce 3 times and loses effectiveness after the second bounce against armored. These many programs also boost her aiming speed.
-Robotic strength, Several high performance pistons increase her agile abilities as well as her strength and endurance against guns.
-Double jump, tiny jetpacks allow her to perform a second jump in mid air.
-Water proof, Kat's wiring is protected and covered, negating and chance of water damage to her circuits.
-Lock on, Kat can place a mark on a specific individual and a background process will highlight this person until they are either killed, Get over 45 meters away or when the lock on is manually removed.
-Bioligically engineered augmentations, Kat has been treated in a lab where scientists manipulated some of her natural abilities wich backfired and mutated, granting her some super human abilities. - Bioligically tempered abilities:
-Augmentation control, a crucial ability that is what lets her deal with the mechanic enhancements that her robotic limbs give her. If this ability was somehow removed Kat would no longer be able to control her body.
-Perception, Kat can hear ridiculously far being able to hear trouble from faraway, the unfortunate backlash is that it is sensitive to the point where things she wants to hear can get drowned out unless she focuses.
-Regen, Kat's natural healing rate is higher than that of others, allowing minor wounds to heal in a matter of hours and very severe wounds to heal in a matter of weeks if it does not bleed her out or gets infected.
-Bio enchantments, During her augmenting, she even recieved a few arcane abilities giving her a variety of abilities that she needs. - Bio Enchanted abilities:
-Ricochet bullets, her touch lets certain metals gain higher mass and density, allowing for her shots to bounce 3 times after being shot out.
-Armor shine, The enchantments cover her armor in a magical aura, allowing her to see in the dark better.
Weaknesses: General weaknesses, Kat still carries traits of her former self but there is a backlash to her choice of weaponry. - General weaknesses:
-Proximity, even with her bullets being deadly at all ranges, her having hand to hand combat skills with both bare hands and a sword and her having access to high performance pistons that boost her strength Kat can easily be outlasted if she cant shoot properly, thus making close range an easily exploited weakness.
-Fire damage, Kat still has organic parts and even with her regen, fire will scorch shut her wounds effectively countering her regen and leaving her unable to recover from damage.
-Mechanical snags, the scientists who enhanced her cared very little for her safety and thus never took the time to fix the weaknesses her robotic body left open. - Mechanical snags:
-Endurance, Kat can easily handle a few gunshots against her and tank sharp weapons but she is highly vulerable to blunt weaponry that damage her augments, explosive weapons that straight up scrap her armor and dismantling it alltogether if she is knocked out.
-Noisy, Kat herself can be noisy, but the many pistons and joints her robotic body has make noise too making her less effective in stealth and much easier to be detected.
-Weak spots, Kat's mechanical body has several weak spots, specifically her jetpack tanks. While the tanks are small and nearly impossible to hit, explosives can set them off easily, completely destroying her ability to double jump and dealing greater damage to Kat herself.
-Biological backlashes, even if her biologically altered body allows her to do more than she originally could the tests were not fully succesfull and thus left some scars behind that can be used to her disadvantage. - Biological backlashes:
-Sensitive, Kat's hyper perception ability has to unfortunate backlash that she is mostly sensitive to noise to the point where she has to wear earplugs in crowded places to not get into physical pain.
-Control panel, Kat's ability to control her mechanic limbs is given to her through bio enhancements. Disabling this somehow (I.E through disease, The scientists who created her purposely removing it etc.) would instantly paralyze her until her regen ability reactivates it.
-Magical drawbacks, the enchantments were thrown on with no forethought and thus the drawbacks were not taken into consideration. - Magical drawbacks:
-Stealth, the lit up suit makes Kat completely unable to sneak up on her opponents, thus forcing her to always fight head on.
History: Long ago, Kat was a succesfull assassin, being known for her spectacular ricochet kills, she was capable to bounce her bullets of walls and predict where they could go after that bounce, being able to kill someone technically in cover. She was trained by many elite snipers but it soon became clear she had a severe disregard for rules and thus went rogue, working for her own and not for the organization that trained her. Not much after she got herself a ship and began pirating and heisting all over the place. She quickly became notorious and became wanted pretty fast. Soon she'd have the law and organizations after her all the time. After a long time, it was a company of scientists that finally caught her. After collecting the bounty on her they were allowed to conduct expirements on her 'dead' body. The truth was that they never killed her but put her into some sort of hyper sleep, once the tests started she was alive, awake and well. They seeked to create super soldiers of the sort and their previous test subjects have died. Kat's predecessor survived the installment but wasnt given the mutation to control the body properly, a mutation that they now had and put into Kat's mutation along with the other few. One unfortunate thing about the tests was that the subjects were never put to sleep, they were awake when their bodyparts were being replaced and the mutations were installed. Of course this pissed her off and as soon as the tests were completed and she was thrown in her cell to be shipped off to an allied organization wanting soldiers she escaped and tore the labs down and left. Currently she roams the world looking for contracts...
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Kiora
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| | Subject: Re: The worst pirate you've ever heard of Mon May 08, 2017 1:06 pm | |
| Interesting character! :O | |
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Mavanger
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| | Subject: Re: The worst pirate you've ever heard of Mon May 08, 2017 5:18 pm | |
| Alright, there are a number of options. Having read all of this, you can A) Make your history a bit longer, B) Add some more weaknesses or make them more severe, or C)You can remove some strengths/tone the ones you do have down.
If you make the history longer I'd like to see at least one new paragraph to explain all the strengths. She has 10 strengths, several of which are major ones, and 8 weaknesses, 1 of which has hidden strengths (I.E Endurance- can tank everything but blunt weapons)
Also, last thing, how would one disable her bio enhancement? Remember that the rule against metagaming protects people from insta-killing a weakness like that, so it's just so that we as staff can know it is a legitimate weakness. If it's still an issue feel free to just PM or DM me. | |
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